The Path volume 4 number 2

New issue of The Path is now available in time for Christmas giving!

Surgery

I’m recovering from surgery complications. Will be back soon.

New title just in time for Halloween–The Cemetery Sleeper

From: www.saguarobooks.com
Ten-year-old Freddy Pesterfield is certain his aunt’s creaky old farmhouse in TN is haunted, and it’s not long before he begins sleepwalking to the nearby family cemetery. Freddy desperately searches for a way to keep from waking in the graveyard, but he cannot stop a vengeful ghost from luring him there.
With the help of his wary cousin and his superstitious friend, Freddy looks for remedies to get rid of the ghost named Tump. Can Freddy unearth the mystery of Tump’s death before Tump leads him to the cemetery one last time?

Ten Titles

We now have 10 titles in our catalog. See the titles, read the first chapters and buy a book or two. Makes great Christmas gifts or birthday gifts for those hard-to-buy-for teens and pre-teens! www.saguarobooks.com 

The Delayed Subject with There

by Maeve Maddox

From Daily Writing Tips
 

In conversation we’d probably find ourselves tongue-tied if we couldn’t begin sentences with the grammatical subject there:

There are only three eggs left in the refrigerator.

There’s a lot of traffic on the freeway this morning.

In each example there begins the sentence, but the true subjects– eggs and a lot of traffic –are delayed until after the verb.

There is nothing grammatically wrong with this construction. Did you notice that I just wrote a sentence beginning with “There is”? Simply placing the true subject first would create Yoda-speak:

Nothing grammatically wrong with this construction is.

Rewriting an expletive sentence (the kind that begins with a subject place-holder like “There”) requires a little more effort than simple reversal. That’s probably why we let so many of them creep into our first drafts.

Compare the following:

There is research that shows that phonics is the most important component of beginning reading.

Research shows that phonics is the most important component of beginning reading.

Not only is the delayed subject pattern wordy, but it can also lead to a lack of subject-verb agreement. Here are some examples from websites offering professional services:

There’s good reasons EmCare is the industry leader

There’s areas of freezing drizzle/mist out there this afternoon.

There’s schooling costs, there’s health costs and they’ll continue to be provided out of the centres for those who are being temporarily resettled…(This was a government minister.)

Informal conversation is one thing, but writing for a professional purpose is something else again. If the “There is” opener is the preferred stylistic choice, then the delayed subject should agree with the verb that precedes it:

Just in time for Halloween--The Cemetery Sleeper

Ten-year-old Freddy Pesterfield is certain his aunt’s creaky old farmhouse in TN is haunted, and it’s not long before he begins sleepwalking to the nearby  family cemetery. Freddy desperately searches for a way to keep from waking in the graveyard, but he cannot stop a vengeful ghost from luring him there.

With the help of his wary cousin and his superstitious friend, Freddy looks for remedies to get rid of the ghost named Tump. Can Freddy unearth the mystery of Tump’s death before Tump leads him to the cemetery one last time?

Fundraising for literacy

As a first part of our fundraising plan, we have launched page on the Indiegogo site:

https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/so-others-may-read/x/8511230

 

Please visit the site, donate and, most importantly, pass the word on  to your contacts.

So Others May Read

New title from Saguaro Books, LLC

The Calling of the Flute

Set in Lithuania in 1897, this historical romance is the tale of a young woman conflicted by the traditions and laws of herreligion and a need for her own identity. For most of her fifteen years, Hannah has loved Gershon, the Rabbi’s son.A match is made, but Hannah fears becoming a Rabbi’s wife and having to be aperfect example of womanhood. In her mind, the traditional cutting of her hair and wearing a wig or scarf means losing her identity. Hannah tells Gershon how she feels and he breaks the engagement, shaming her family. Life takes a turn forthe worse, when her young brothers’ fight with town boys causes a pogrom, an attack by Russian Cossacks. When the Russian army comes for her brothers to conscript them into the Czar’s army, Hannah’s aunt and uncle offer to smuggle the boys out of Lithuania to America. Hannah begs to go with them, despite the harrowing journey. Along the way, she meets Eli, a young flute player, also running away from Russian conscription. Hannah’s dream of love and life in a safe, free land, may at last be within her grasp if they survive the voyage and get through immigration.

The Copyrights of Co-authors

From an attorney…
If two authors work together to write a book, they become joint owners in the copyright to the book. Unless the writing was separated in some easily discernable way, both authors own 50% of the work and each have all of the rights that a single author would have. If both authors contributed to every chapter and worked together to decide on wording, there is no way to differentiate between their work and therefore no method to divide the copyright.
On the other hand, if each author wrote certain chapters of the book and those chapters could be separated without destroying the work, then there might be a way to divide the copyright. Typically, that is not the case. The applicable federal law states that “a ‘joint work’ is a work prepared by two or more authors with the intention that their contributions be merged into inseparable or interdependent parts of a unitary whole.”
Co-authorship can be problematic because both creators have the right to commercialize and monetize the product and can easily (and frequently do) interfere with each other’s efforts if there is a lack of cooperation.
When co-authorship is contemplated, it is recommended that they enter into a written assignment of the copyright to avoid joint ownership of the copyright. One of the authors can assign his rights to the other author in exchange for compensation, recognition, and other negotiated terms.
If the co-authors cannot agree on one owner, they can both assign the copyright to a company in which they both have an ownership interest. The company, such as a limited liability company, should be governed by a written agreement between the owners. That agreement should include the rights and obligations of the respective members, how to deal with contingencies such as the death of one of the owners, buyout provisions by one owner of the other’s interest, as well as other operational matters.
When a creative work is owned by only one person or one entity, there is a clearer direction for commercialization of the work and there are far fewer disputes over the respective rights and obligations of the parties.

Twelve Useful Websites to Improve your Writing

1. Words-to-Use.com - A different kind of thesaurus.

2. OneLook.com - One quick dictionary search tool.

3. Vocabulary.com - The quickest, most intelligent way to improve your vocabulary.

4. ZenPen.io - A minimalist writing zone where you can block out all distractions.

5. 750words.com - Write three new pages every day.

6. Readability-Score.com - Get scored on your writing's readability.

7. YouShouldWrite.com - Get a new writing prompt every time you visit.

8. WriterKata.com - Improve your writing with repetitive exercises.

9. www.IWL.me  - (I Write Like) A tool that analyzes your writing and tells you which famous authors you most write like.

10. HemingwayApp.com - Simplify your writing.

11. FakeNameGenerator.com - Generate fake names for your characters.

12. Storyline.io - Collaborate on a story with others by submitting a paragraph.

Johnny Webber - Daily Zen List